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Re: Homework 2/9/2013 No one is there
Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 11:12 am
by Heather
Conquering fears. New beginnings....
Heather
Re: Homework 2/9/2013 No one is there
Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 12:09 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
That is a great poem Marty and sadly so true - we can never go back - only forge new paths forward. Old loves, old memories and old places though are always held in our hearts. Good writing IMO
Cheers
Maureen
Re: Homework 2/9/2013 No one is there
Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2013 2:37 pm
by Neville Briggs
I think this one is going well Marty. I think it is better than the other one about memories. The sentences here are more direct ( subject-verb-object ) and I think that makes more impact in our poetry. Well that's what I am trying to learn. A long way to go yet.
Re: Homework 2/9/2013 No one is there
Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2013 9:03 am
by jakkimay
Wow! Loved it! Brought back memories for me.
Re: Homework 2/9/2013 No one is there
Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 9:43 pm
by Robyn
Good poem Marty, and glad you had a good visit home.
Re: Homework 2/9/2013 No one is there
Posted: Fri Sep 13, 2013 2:05 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
