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Bob Pacey
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Post by Bob Pacey » Wed Oct 02, 2013 10:50 pm

Lost it


I sat down and I wrote a poem with all the prompts and it was swell
Under the bridge, a space in time and a million stars as well.
I spoke of ancient rivers that flowed across some distant plain
Fossilized bones of prehistoric creatures exposed by drumming rain.

I had them all upon the screen but time was running late
I went to put it up in drafts to finish at a later date.
But when I went to save it I had put no header in
so the screen told me to add one or I'd end up in the bin.

I put the header on it but I hit submit instead
It came up on the screen and I went right off my head.
I really was not finished but I was still in the race
but I hit the delete button and it drifted into space.

Not joking this time Oh shit

Bob
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After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

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Re: Homework

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Oct 03, 2013 2:24 pm

Such a pain when that happens Bob and I am sure we have all done it at some stage - never mind you still did good work with the prompts - well done.

Cheers

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Re: Homework

Post by warooa » Sat Oct 05, 2013 7:10 am

Probably better than the original :lol:

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