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Homework 30/6

Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2014 4:17 pm
by Ron
Well I didn't get a go the first time arouund :) ;)

The Bush

Assemble all the big red trucks, the tinder is so dry
Release the stop cock safety valves, no need to question why,
The air as from a dragons breath blasts scorching tidal waves,
As if its bloods hot cauldron, it’s intimidation craves!
Let safety first prioritise - the going will get tough,
As eucalypts explode, polluting volatile hot stuff!
There’ll be no time for anyone, to sit upon their tush!
When this extreme of nature flares, in our …Australian bush!

© Ron Boughton
June ‘14

Re: Homework 30/6

Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2014 5:03 pm
by Heather
At last, an original rhyme for "bush". Love it Ron! :lol: Nothing hotter than that dragon's breath is there?

Heather :)

Re: Homework 30/6

Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2014 6:07 pm
by Ron
Thanks Heather glad that you enjoyed it. :)
Yep, It's hot :twisted: allright!! :)
Ron

Re: Homework 30/6

Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:35 pm
by DollyDot
I like it Ron! Dragon's breath is all the go now especially those of us in their second childhood!
Thanks

Dot

Re: Homework 30/6

Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2014 8:14 pm
by Ron
Thanks For that Dot,
Second childhood! :D perish the thought! it's really only a reassessment of our first! ;)
Cheers
Ron

Re: Homework 30/6

Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2014 8:34 pm
by Heather
There's another one after this one? :) 8-)

Re: Homework 30/6

Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 8:06 am
by Ron
Yep! :o :D ;)

Re: Homework 30/6

Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 10:45 am
by Maureen K Clifford
Well done and a great use of the prompts Ron and as Heather so rightly points out a novel rhyme for Bush. :? You might want to correct 'there tush' to 'their tush ' :lol:

Re: Homework 30/6

Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 11:06 am
by Ron
Thanks Maureen, and oops! :oops: yes Correction all done, I have been doing that a bit lately, have to give the brainbox 'spell check' a good talking to! :shock: ;) :lol:
Cheers
Ron

Re: Homework 30/6

Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2014 11:45 am
by Maureen K Clifford
I've given this one a run on our Facebook Page Ron :lol: along with a great bushfire piccie from a mate of mine