ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

MY COUNTRY GIRL

I love an ample figure, a lass that entertains
with prominent good features,( I mean of course, her brains )
I love her smooth horizons, I love her dimpled knees.
This beauty; she's a terror! The wide strong girl for me.

There's life in the old boy yet! Love it Neville.

Heather

PS you are on a roll at the moment.

And more please go on if ya game.

The stark white unblemished features
so tragically I swoon.

Bob

I agree, give us more - surely there's room to move after the "dimpled knees"

Marty

Well Heather, the writer and the "speaker" are not necessarily the same person.


Thanks Bob, Marty. I'll leave it at that.

There's no end of possibilities for this one Neville - I wait with bated breath

Terry

Good one Terry - I agree with the rest of the comments - it begs another verse or two (if you're game)

Yeah come on Neville so much more you can say ? what trouble could you get into anyway.

The stark white unblemished features
so tragically I swoon.
The tattoo that slowly appears
each time you flash the moon.

Bob

I'd better leave it Bob, you're getting too excited, overwrought.