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Homework 25/1/15 - FATHOM THE DEPTHS

Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2015 8:43 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
FATHOM THE DEPTHS …….Maureen Clifford © The Scribbly Bark Poet


He was a master mariner, he sailed the seven seas
to places that were exotic and strange.
No matter where he travelled women flocked to him in droves,
no prisoners planned just passion in exchange
for one night of sweet passion from a man with looks divine
a man bearded and handsome, attitude that would define
he knew just how to handle life and he would cross the line
to protect the females under his protection.

His macho attitude could turn the strongest women weak
willingly giving up their independence
to rely on this vision in a dress white uniform
they’d flirt and flaunt all night with no repentance.
He swept them off their feet with his witty repartee
he plied them with champagne and food and oh his mastery
of l’amore was legendary and all wanted to be
the mistress of this fine good looking fellow.

But he’d a wife and four kids in a port near Sydney town,
and made no secret of their sweet existence.
Above all he prized honesty. He never ever lied
just didn’t tell the truth and claimed the distance
in fact meant he was separated – therefore free to roam
and being a seafarer his ship was mistress and home.
Seems he was never lonely for he was never alone.
There’s a girl in every port when in the navy.

Re: Homework 25/1/15 - FATHOM THE DEPTHS

Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2015 8:51 pm
by Heather
Them old seafarers - you just couldn't trust 'em.

Looks as though we shouldn't put you and Wazza in the same room Maureeen! :lol:

Heather :)

Re: Homework 25/1/15 - FATHOM THE DEPTHS

Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2015 8:16 am
by Bob Pacey
One track minds some people ;) ;) ;) ;) ;)


Bob

Re: Homework 25/1/15 - FATHOM THE DEPTHS

Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2015 8:32 am
by Neville Briggs
It's a sad poem Maureen. The man who doesn't know the meaning of love.

Re: Homework 25/1/15 - FATHOM THE DEPTHS

Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2015 8:47 am
by Bob Pacey
I'm trying to write something but all that keeps coming into my mind is


The Boy Stood on The Burning Deck !


Bob

Re: Homework 25/1/15 - FATHOM THE DEPTHS

Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2015 2:09 pm
by alongtimegone
Just write it with a different story Bob.

The boy stood on the burning deck
His feet were getting hot
He grabbed the hose and goodness knows
It really helped a lot. :lol:

Re: Homework 25/1/15 - FATHOM THE DEPTHS

Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2015 1:42 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
tell me more :lol:

Re: Homework 25/1/15 - FATHOM THE DEPTHS

Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2015 3:45 pm
by Bob Pacey
The boy stood on the burning deck
pressed up against the mast.
He vowed he would never leave that spot
until Oscar pinched his ( might need one of Nevs slight rhymes here )

But Oscar was a cunning lad
he threw the boy a plum
and when he went to pick it up
he pinched him up the ( same as before but it has to rhyme with Plum ) ?

Re: Homework 25/1/15 - FATHOM THE DEPTHS

Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2015 11:55 am
by alongtimegone
:lol: :lol:

Re: Homework 25/1/15 - FATHOM THE DEPTHS

Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 8:09 pm
by Shelley Hansen
Definitely an unadmirable admiral!! (That's a bit weak, sorry!!)

Cheers, Shelley