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Homework WE 9/2/15 - Cinquain for Summer
Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2015 5:26 pm
by Shelley Hansen
Cinquain for Summer
(c) Shelley Hansen 30/1/15
Summer
blistering road
bounces heat-shimmer back
striking my eyes without mercy
scorching
Summer
breathing hot air
through the dust in my throat
searching horizon for storm clouds
brewing
Summer
slicing white light
preludes thunder's refrain
torrents of water stream earthward
blessing
Re: Homework WE 9/2/15 - Cinquain for Summer
Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2015 2:58 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Oh this is lovely Shelley - well done - love the way you have captured the feeling of the heat and the dust and the final blessed release when that rain finally falls. Nicely crafted.
Re: Homework WE 9/2/15 - Cinquain for Summer
Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2015 9:13 am
by Shelley Hansen
Thank you Maureen - it certainly is the season for it!
Re: Homework WE 9/2/15 - Cinquain for Summer
Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2015 1:24 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
I'm going to set this up on a picture background for you - just searching for a picture to do it justice.
Re: Homework WE 9/2/15 - Cinquain for Summer
Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2015 1:52 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Here you go - hope you like it
Shelley Hansen cinquain.jpg
Re: Homework WE 9/2/15 - Cinquain for Summer
Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2015 2:01 pm
by Shelley Hansen
Wow! Yes indeed - thank you so much!
Re: Homework WE 9/2/15 - Cinquain for Summer
Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2015 10:15 am
by alongtimegone
Very nicely contrived and written Shelley.
wazza