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Homework 9.3.15 CYCLONE MARCIA - RAIN RAIN GO AWAY

Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2015 4:54 am
by Cropduster
CYCLONE MARCIA
RAIN RAIN GO AWAY

Circle the wagons and batten the hatches
You're in for one Hell of a ride
Collect all the candles, the lanterns, the matches
Looks like there's nowhere to hide
Outside the world wages war at our windows
Neighbours all gather in fear
Ever so stronger the cyclonic wind blows
Mothers hold their children near
Away with you, storm clouds, you're not welcome here
Rain rain, go away
Come again another day
Is what I hear the children say
And with that a rainbow appears.

Re: Homework 9.3.15 CYCLONE MARCIA - RAIN RAIN GO AWAY

Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2015 7:32 am
by DollyDot
Great work. I really enjoyed your piece. It's captures some great images!

Dot

Re: Homework 9.3.15 CYCLONE MARCIA - RAIN RAIN GO AWAY

Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2015 7:58 am
by Maureen K Clifford
Oh well done Allan - challenge met and conquered - excellent

Re: Homework 9.3.15 CYCLONE MARCIA - RAIN RAIN GO AWAY

Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2015 8:45 am
by Cropduster
Thanks Maureen and Dolly.

I must say, Maureen, I look forward to the challenges :D

Allan

Re: Homework 9.3.15 CYCLONE MARCIA - RAIN RAIN GO AWAY

Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2015 8:50 am
by Bob Pacey
I think you got a little bored at the end ? Allan



Bob

Re: Homework 9.3.15 CYCLONE MARCIA - RAIN RAIN GO AWAY

Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2015 9:27 am
by Cropduster
:lol: :lol: Bob

I does look a bit like that. When I got to the R the first obvious word was rain, and it just took off from there.

Allan

Re: Homework 9.3.15 CYCLONE MARCIA - RAIN RAIN GO AWAY

Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:09 pm
by Shelley Hansen
Good one Allan. I love "world wages war at our windows" - beautiful alliteration!!

Cheers, Shelley

Re: Homework 9.3.15 CYCLONE MARCIA - RAIN RAIN GO AWAY

Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2015 3:37 pm
by alongtimegone
That's a corker Allan.
Wazza

Re: Homework 9.3.15 CYCLONE MARCIA - RAIN RAIN GO AWAY

Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2015 4:08 pm
by Catherine Lee
I agree - Great job Allan!