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Homework 23rd March - BACK TO REALITY

Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2015 8:26 pm
by Cropduster
BACK TO REALITY

In a squalid corner of a despicable room,
painted with despair and cocooned in a gloom.
His back to reality, entombed by the walls,
scratching the itching, the skin as it crawls.
Searching for one more black usable vein
to ride the syringe to nirvana again.
Behind him the world he once knew marches on.
His back to reality, a breath and he's gone.

Copyright (c) Allan Cropper March 2015

Re: Homework 23rd March - BACK TO REALITY

Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2015 9:11 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Good one Allan - a chilling reality check of a ongoing problem. Well done

Re: Homework 23rd March - BACK TO REALITY

Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 1:25 pm
by Catherine Lee
Chilling indeed Allan, and straight to the point - I particularly like (if that's the right word for such a subject) the line 'to ride the syringe to nirvana again'.

Re: Homework 23rd March - BACK TO REALITY

Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:20 pm
by Cropduster
Thanks Maureen and Catherine

I must have been in a particularly dark mood

Allan

Re: Homework 23rd March - BACK TO REALITY

Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2015 10:33 am
by alongtimegone
Well done and I agree with Catherine ... great line ... very poetic.
Wazza