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Reflection

Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2015 12:38 pm
by Terry
Mines a bit of a fudge with the prompts Maureen.

REFLECTION

The frozen breath of winter’s morn had touched this sacred ground
and coated all the eye could see with frost for miles around.
And seemed to bite into my flesh while I was standing there;
I sensed a tear roll down my cheek – no shame I guess to care.

Still standing by that tiny mound my mind then clears at last,
with thoughts about a tragedy that happened in the past.
A blaze upon a nearby tree had said his name was Beau,
just three years old when he had died, one hundred years ago.

This lonely grave was near a mine no doubt from gold rush days,
when rumours of a distant find could set men’s minds ablaze.
What tragedy had happened here? It seems I’ll never know,
for not a clue could now be found around this old time show.

For twenty years I’ve called in here each time I’ve passed this way
and always there is sadness and I sense it here today.
I turn at last to leave again, but know that I’ll be back,
out to this long forgotten place way off the beaten track.

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© T. E. Piggott

Re: Reflection

Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2015 6:52 pm
by Trisha Patterson
Lovely Terry. You took me to that very place.
Trish

Re: Reflection

Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 12:04 pm
by Terry
Thanks Trish
As I said this ones fudges a bit with the prompts,
I was trying to think of something more appropriate but this kept popping up so thought - why not.

Terry

Re: Reflection

Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 12:37 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
I like fudge :lol: That's a beautiful poem Terry and if the prompts got you writing or sharing it's all to the good - my job is done (sigh). Nothing is set in concrete here.

Re: Reflection

Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2015 2:13 am
by Irene
Beautiful Terry.
Those lonely graves leave many questions to ponder, don't they?

Re: Reflection

Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2015 10:51 am
by Terry
Thanks Maureen & Irene.

It's strange how things or memories pop into your mind with just a stray word on in this case a prompt.

Terry

Re: Reflection

Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2015 7:47 pm
by Shelley Hansen
Lovely poem, Terry. Like Trish, it really took me there, visualizing the scene. That's what it's all about :)

Cheers, Shelley

Re: Reflection

Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2015 10:47 pm
by Terry
Thanks Shelly
Perhaps I can point a few spots out for you to visit if you ever get over this way.
Mind you some of them a a bit remote.

Terry

Re: Reflection

Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2015 4:48 pm
by Shelley Hansen
I'll certainly look forward to that!

Re: Reflection

Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2015 4:57 pm
by Catherine Lee
This is lovely Terry - I have so often stood and wondered at various graves, and just like Shelley you really took me there. Nicely done!