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Re: Grandma's Secret Hiding Place
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2015 11:17 am
by Maureen K Clifford
Good one Trisha - nicely done. These prompts seem to be bringing out ghosts in old buildings and sad stories
I liked your use of the word PELF - as in money, especially when gained in a dishonest or dishonourable way. That was a good pick up and different.
Your use of the prompts was excellent
Re: Grandma's Secret Hiding Place
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2015 11:25 am
by Trisha Patterson
Thanks Maureen. Appreciate the feedback.
Trish
Re: Grandma's Secret Hiding Place
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2015 1:28 pm
by vwalla
Trish
Nicely crafted
Val W
Re: Grandma's Secret Hiding Place
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2015 4:58 pm
by Shelley Hansen
Well written indeed, Trish! I like the use of the word "pelf" also - so long since I've seen it, I had forgotten its meaning!
Cheers, Shelley
Re: Grandma's Secret Hiding Place
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2015 5:36 pm
by Trisha Patterson
Thanks Val & Shelley. The word "pelf" almost sounds like something quite sinister!
Trish
Re: Grandma's Secret Hiding Place
Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2015 10:23 am
by David Campbell
Intriguing, Trish..."curiouser and curiouser", as Alice would have said. Who was the mysterious Eloise, and what happened to her?
David
Re: Grandma's Secret Hiding Place
Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2015 12:36 pm
by Trisha Patterson
Can't reveal too much, for therein lies the mystery and intrigue!
Trish
Re: Grandma's Secret Hiding Place
Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2015 4:12 pm
by Catherine Lee
A clever and enjoyable poem Trish that leaves you wanting to learn more!
Re: Grandma's Secret Hiding Place
Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2015 7:13 pm
by Trisha Patterson
Thanks Catherine. Glad you enjoyed.
Trish