Homework 13/7 - A Stolen Kiss

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Homework 13/7 - A Stolen Kiss

Post by Terry » Sun Jul 05, 2015 11:17 am

A Stolen Kiss

The flood plain sparkles brightly here as sun shines on the snow
and memories resurface now of days from long ago.
Fresh snow upon the trees nearby awakens dreams once more,
of stolen kisses from the past when you lived here before.

The snowy mountains rise behind and bring a sense of awe
and there’s the trickling of the creeks as ice begins to thaw.
A trick of light and shadows move out in the falling sleet
and I could swear I see you there down where we used to meet.

I look once more at what remains of this old shack to day
and if these walls could only talk I wonder what they’d say.
Of talk around a blazing fire that kept this old shack warm,
when just outside a blizzard - or a freezing winter’s storm.

What secret lover’s whispers then are locked still deep inside?
What memories remain of early times now cast aside?
It’s National Park through here, and the pioneers moved on,
an era has now ended – and the grand old days long gone.

*****


© T. E. Piggott

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Re: Homework 13/7 - A Stolen Kiss

Post by Neville Briggs » Sun Jul 05, 2015 2:57 pm

Well done Terry. :)
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Re: Homework 13/7 - A Stolen Kiss

Post by Terry » Sun Jul 05, 2015 8:04 pm

Thanks Neville

I knew those trips to the high country would come in handy one day.

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Re: Homework 13/7 - A Stolen Kiss

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sun Jul 05, 2015 9:43 pm

Love it Terry + good use of the prompts and the touch of romance is just right in this story Well done :D
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Re: Homework 13/7 - A Stolen Kiss

Post by Terry » Sun Jul 05, 2015 10:44 pm

Thanks Maureen

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Re: Homework 13/7 - A Stolen Kiss

Post by Catherine Lee » Mon Jul 06, 2015 3:36 pm

Lovely poem Terry - so atmospheric and romantic!

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Re: Homework 13/7 - A Stolen Kiss

Post by Shelley Hansen » Mon Jul 06, 2015 8:53 pm

Beautiful, Terry!

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Re: Homework 13/7 - A Stolen Kiss

Post by Terry » Tue Jul 07, 2015 12:03 am

Thanks Catherine & Shelly - haven't had time yet to read the others yet but I will soon.

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