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Homework - The Seeker

Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2015 6:50 pm
by Catherine Lee
The barman tried to put me off—he shook his head, confused;
“That red dirt road goes nowhere mate. I’d change your plans,” he mused.
Yet here I stand regardless, stroking precious magic stones,
and smiling at the ancient wisdom coursing through my bones;
the timeless stories handed down from forebears of my clan—
now duty calls— I’ll make this journey, prove myself a man.
The skyline shimmers brightly, there are unknown fears ahead,
but troubles build our characters - that’s what the elders said.
No matter where the road may lead, how far I have to go,
I’ll prove myself, and find myself, and in the end I’ll know
there’s always something round the bend, another way back home,
regardless of the hardships or how far one has to roam.
There’s no such thing as roads to nowhere, just alternate ways—
the destination might take years to reach, or months, or days,
but nowhere’s always close to somewhere – this remains a fact,
and insight’s gained from different people met, and paths you’ve tracked.
This red dirt road goes nowhere so they say, yet here I stand,
determined I will follow it, traverse this sacred land...
I raise my eyes to focus, picture every challenge won—
then take my first few steps towards that distant shining sun.

Re: Homework - The Seeker

Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2015 7:32 pm
by Shelley Hansen
Oh wow - just great, Catherine! Not only a thought-provoking piece of philosophy, but an object lesson in rhyme, rhythm and syllable stress! I expected nothing less, of course :)

Cheers, Shelley

Re: Homework - The Seeker

Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2015 8:48 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
WOW! WOW! WOW!

I love it Catherine - absolutely spot on - terrific use of the prompts and it rolls off the tongue smooth as silk. And I like the moral in the story. Well done you :lol:

Re: Homework - The Seeker

Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2015 10:26 pm
by mummsie
That's a beauty Catherine!

Re: Homework - The Seeker

Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2015 9:08 am
by Neville Briggs
Good on ya Catherine.

Re: Homework - The Seeker

Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2015 10:47 am
by David Campbell
Yep, agree with all of the above, Catherine...a fine piece of writing!

Cheers
David

Re: Homework - The Seeker

Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2015 11:25 am
by Catherine Lee
Wow, thank you all so very much - I really appreciate your wonderful comments!