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Homework week ending 01/02/16 - Willow

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2016 11:20 am
by Wendy Seddon
Willow, Willow do not weep
into your ice-burg rose bouquet
don’t let melancholy creep
into your heart to spoil your day.

Priceless diamonds on your hand
embedded in a ring of gold,
cascading stones of brilliant cut
conveying promises of old.

Girlhood dreams are coming true -
white wedding and a loving beau,
Every wish you wished is nigh
why then do the salt tears flow?

Re: Homework week ending 01/02/16 - Willow

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2016 7:41 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
That is charming Wendy - quite delightful and a beaut use of the prompts as well. Well done

Re: Homework week ending 01/02/16 - Willow

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2016 9:47 pm
by Shelley Hansen
Very nice Wendy - reminds me of the old English poets. A trip down memory lane to poetry books of school days!

Cheers
Shelley

Re: Homework week ending 01/02/16 - Willow

Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2016 3:04 pm
by Catherine Lee
Yes, I agree - really like this Wendy. It intrigues, and has shades of yesteryear as Shelley says.