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Homework 25.4.

Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2016 11:09 pm
by Neville Briggs
THE KING OF SWING

I didn't have a TV or iPad,
the DIY and park were all I had.

A hardwood plank, suspended on two chains
was seating for a super swooping plane.

Push off the ground, and soar into the sky
as feet rise up to tread the clouds and fly.

My plane flew faster, higher than the rest;
in winged imaginations I was best,

and bolder still, while standing on the seat
all earth would sway and dip beneath my feet.

In just the briefest warp of time and space
apotheosis seemed to charge the place.

Re: Homework 25.4.

Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2016 6:10 pm
by Shelley Hansen
Ah yes - who hasn't flown to the stars on a childhood swing!!

Enjoyed this one, Nev.

Cheers, Shelley

Re: Homework 25.4.

Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2016 11:33 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Swing low sweet chariot - our swings opened our imaginations for many things when we were kids - you took a different tangent, top marks for thinking outside the square Neville - well done.

Re: Homework 25.4.

Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2016 6:00 pm
by Neville Briggs
Thanks Shelley, Maureen. :)

Re: Homework 25.4.

Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2016 6:30 pm
by Heather
I joined you in your childhood musings Neville.

Heather :D

Re: Homework 25.4.

Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2016 6:52 pm
by Bob Pacey
I can not understand half those big words Nev ?


Robert

Re: Homework 25.4.

Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2016 7:48 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Google is your friend Bob - or Funk an Wagnells :lol:

Re: Homework 25.4.

Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2016 8:11 pm
by Neville Briggs
Thanks Heather.

There are no big words for poets Bob, only the best words in the best order. ;)

Re: Homework 25.4.

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2016 10:05 am
by Terry
G/day Neville

Nothing like slipping back to those carefree childhood days,
when with a little imagination a swing can launch you into, space or anywhere else for that matter.

Terry

Re: Homework 25.4.

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2016 11:48 pm
by Catherine Lee
You really thought outside the box for this one Neville and I love it. I still can't resist the joys of a swing even today, and was on one just two weeks ago on the beach in Phuket!