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Homework ending 01/08 mini pome
Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2016 2:17 pm
by Wendy Seddon
Just a little one today.
Hey Nana do you want to come and hang with me awhile?
Take the bikes and freewheel round and round the park and I’ll
be good and look both right and left before we cross the street
but this time will you wait for me? That really would be neat!
Re: Homework ending 01/08 mini pome
Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2016 7:16 am
by Shelley Hansen
Hi Wendy
What a little gem! I love it and the mental picture instantly formed itself in my mind.
Another example of lovely crafting in a short verse.
Cheers
Shelley
Re: Homework ending 01/08 mini pome
Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2016 9:44 am
by mummsie
Yes, you have painted the picture with the minimum of words, and I love how those words roll off the tongue Wendy. Delightful.
Sue
Re: Homework ending 01/08 mini pome
Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2016 1:39 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
I agree with Sue and Shelley - you have crafted a lovely little vignette here Wendy. In this instance less is certainly more. Well done.
Re: Homework ending 01/08 mini pome
Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2016 2:29 am
by Catherine Lee
This is delightful Wendy!
Re: Homework ending 01/08 mini pome
Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2016 3:03 pm
by David Campbell
Yep, short and sweet, Wendy!
Cheers
David