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we 26 06 Shared Experience

Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2017 8:09 am
by Wendy Seddon
Sorry, no rhyme came to me for this, but the prompts rang true.

Amidst a plethora of poets I took my place,
hoping I had reached an appropriate standard.
Public confidence was high,
that they would be entertained.
As I step up to the mike, I light a candle in my mind
in honour of my Dad, reflecting the luminous colour of
his love and pride.
Illuminated bridges connect the myriad memories
of my childhood and beyond.

Re: we 26 06 Shared Experience

Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2017 4:26 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Good on you Wendy - that is a fine piece IMO although 'reached' would work better - might want to fix that typo up. Why not give this one a shot in the Ipswich Poetry Feast Open Age section - http://www.ipswichpoetryfeast.com.au/

Re: we 26 06 Shared Experience

Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2017 6:28 pm
by Shelley Hansen
Well done, Wendy!

I love this word picture and alliteration:
Illuminated bridges connect the myriad memories
of my childhood and beyond.
Cheers
Shelley

Re: we 26 06 Shared Experience

Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2017 8:02 pm
by Wendy Seddon
Thank you girls. Typo fixed. ;)