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Homework 25/12/18

Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2018 4:21 pm
by Neville Briggs
carol singers chime
fat santa gives out lollies
children's faces shine

Re: Homework 25/12/18

Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2018 9:02 am
by Maureen K Clifford
a topical Haiku Neville, just right for the season - well done. I love Haiku's :D

Re: Homework 25/12/18

Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2018 9:59 am
by Terry
It nearly rhymes Neville.
A bit like mine mate, started with promise . . . .

Cheers Terry

Re: Homework 25/12/18

Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2018 3:03 pm
by Neville Briggs
Thanks Terry, Maureen. Haiku are like me, not as simple as they look :lol: this one took four revisions until I thought it might work.

Re: Homework 25/12/18

Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2018 6:30 pm
by Terry
Only Teasing Neville

Nice Haiku


Terry