I love it, Bob take note, thats what the rum will do to you.
Thanks for that John
Sue
Collaborative Poem 8 - The Plastered Cockatoo
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Re: The Plastered Cockatoo
the door is always open, the kettles always on, my shoulders here to cry on, i'll not judge who's right or wrong.
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Re: The Plastered Cockatoo
These collaborations IMO are always such fun Sue and I agree - thank you John for kicking it off....did it take you to places you have never been?
Cheers
Maureen


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Yes Maureen, found myself looking up bird names, still had a few to use, that poem could have gone on forever.
Enjoyed the fun.
Sue
Enjoyed the fun.
Sue
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Yeah and I thought I'd finished it Sue but true to form a woman has to have the last word. !!!!!!!
Bob


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Re: The Plastered Cockatoo
I'm flabbergasted.
I thank every one of you.
You have done a fine job. You have shown respect to me, as a person, to take time to contribute to this poem.
Thank you.
Yes, things can be tidied up a bit. Though, this happens with all poetry.
TO the Plastered Cockatoo.
Raise your glass.
Regards,
John

I thank every one of you.
You have done a fine job. You have shown respect to me, as a person, to take time to contribute to this poem.

Thank you.
Yes, things can be tidied up a bit. Though, this happens with all poetry.
TO the Plastered Cockatoo.


Regards,
John
Re: The Plastered Cockatoo
Onya John . . . that was fun, had us all in a flap
(note to self: don't start a pun war, Sue wins hands down everytime).
And very nicely tied off at the end there Maureen with that "richer/twitcher" rhyme.
Good fun.
Marty

And very nicely tied off at the end there Maureen with that "richer/twitcher" rhyme.
Good fun.
Marty