Free verse

[Glenny Palmer]

If you wish to listen to an immaculately presented delivery of verse....Go to Audio Uploads, subject: 'The Best You'll Ever Hear'...trust me, you will never listen to a better performance.....(Mannie, how about we weigh this one up with the free verse presenters?)

Cheeers
Glenny

[manfredvijars]

.....does this one count..?

EMPTY © Glenny Palmer

Empty…
what are you?

Echoes, whispers, shadows,
memories, sadness, void?

What sustains you?

Lonliness, pain, distress,
confusion, loss?

What defeats you?

I am so full of you...I can’t begin to imagine.

Sorry Glenny, that stuff is banned! Can you please rearrange it into something that looks like poetry ...

[croc]

OK! (via croc's login cos the site's gone hormonal on mine!)

'FULL'

I can understand your deep concern for 'Empty', Mannie...maate
I had not considered what a trauma that would emanate
for you. I guess I didn't realise I had such pull
when an 'empty' bottle's scary to a bloke who's always 'Full!'

Can I come outta the naughty corner now please?

NOW...WILL YA FIX MY BLEEDIN' LOGIN..???

[manfredvijars]

Yes Dear ...

[Glenny Palmer]

...tank you...