SIN NO. 5 - NOT CHANEL

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SIN NO. 5 - NOT CHANEL

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Jul 23, 2012 5:26 pm

He’d smiling eyes and white, white teeth -
my heart it felt like melted snow.
His quads and biceps held my gaze,
his hairy chest attracted. Whoa.
Thick cast iron weights on rods of steel
he held suspended o’er his chest
and like a boa constrictors grip,
I felt a tightening round my breast.
Push up, pull down, and then again,
his sweat stood out on manly brow.
I felt an urge to reach and wipe
it off with dainty hanky now
But through the church door to the hall
I spied the soutane – priestly dress
and raised my thoughts to higher things
than Father Sam and his bench press.


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Re: SIN NO. 5 - NOT CHANEL

Post by manfredvijars » Mon Jul 23, 2012 8:56 pm

.... be still my beating heart ??? ... :) :D :lol:

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Re: SIN NO. 5 - NOT CHANEL

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:40 am

Huh??? :o :o and what higher things might they be Maureen ???? :)
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Re: SIN NO. 5 - NOT CHANEL

Post by Rimeriter » Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:21 pm

Hmmmmm !! None of the ladies have yet responded.

Perhaps they have just swooned away.

Jim.

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Re: SIN NO. 5 - NOT CHANEL

Post by Heather » Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:25 pm

I don't like hairy chests! :lol:

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Re: SIN NO. 5 - NOT CHANEL

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:27 pm

The 5th of the 10 commandments is, Honour your Father and Mother.( nah, not that )

No. 5 of the seven deadly sins is, anger. ( perhaps not )

In Solomon's list of seven sins in The Book of Proverbs, no. 5 is Feet that run swiftly to mischief. ( hmmmmm ;) )


Now what are you confessing to Maureen ???? :lol: :lol:
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Re: SIN NO. 5 - NOT CHANEL

Post by Dennis N O'Brien » Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:20 pm

Excellent Maureen.
I don't like hairy chests either Heather. :?

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Re: SIN NO. 5 - NOT CHANEL

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Jul 26, 2012 7:53 pm

I do :lol: :lol:
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Re: SIN NO. 5 - NOT CHANEL

Post by Heather » Sat Jul 28, 2012 1:48 pm

We know you do Maureen! :lol:

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Re: SIN NO. 5 - NOT CHANEL

Post by Rimeriter » Sat Jul 28, 2012 4:42 pm

?? Only those with waggly tails ??

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