Hi Glenny,
First of all congratulations on the win.
A great story, beautifully told and written.
And thanks for posting the critique, it contains some excellent advice.
Regards
Terry
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Hi Glenny,
Adding my congratulations as well, as also many thanks for posting the critique, it is really helpful.
Robyn
Adding my congratulations as well, as also many thanks for posting the critique, it is really helpful.
Robyn
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Beautiful Glenny, on all counts!
Ron
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Bonza Glenny. It certainly matches the comments from the assessment. 

Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.