IN MY FATHER'S NAME

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Terry
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Re: IN MY FATHER'S NAME

Post by Terry » Mon Sep 10, 2012 10:38 pm

Hi Glenny,

First of all congratulations on the win.

A great story, beautifully told and written.

And thanks for posting the critique, it contains some excellent advice.

Regards

Terry

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Robyn
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Re: IN MY FATHER'S NAME

Post by Robyn » Wed Sep 12, 2012 7:12 pm

Hi Glenny,
Adding my congratulations as well, as also many thanks for posting the critique, it is really helpful.
Robyn
Robyn Sykes, the Binalong Bard.

Ron
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Re: IN MY FATHER'S NAME

Post by Ron » Wed Sep 12, 2012 7:52 pm

Beautiful Glenny, on all counts!
Ron

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Re: IN MY FATHER'S NAME

Post by Neville Briggs » Fri Sep 14, 2012 11:11 am

Bonza Glenny. It certainly matches the comments from the assessment. :P
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

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