The Farmers' Strike

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Robyn
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Re: The Farmers' Strike

Post by Robyn » Mon Dec 09, 2013 8:23 pm

Thanks Wazza,
When the first verse came to me I thought *!##*! I wonder if I could possibly maintain that for the whole poem.
But that was the verse in my head, and once in the head it is hard to dislodge, so I thought I may as well have a crack - and I'm pleased I did!
Robyn Sykes, the Binalong Bard.

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Glenny Palmer
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Re: The Farmers' Strike

Post by Glenny Palmer » Tue Dec 10, 2013 7:16 pm

Ooowah! Robyn swore.......... :lol:
The purpose of my life is to serve as a warning to others.

Terry
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Re: The Farmers' Strike

Post by Terry » Wed Dec 11, 2013 3:04 pm

Hi Robyn,
Great use of internal rhymes and word combinations.

A very enjoyable read and a well deserved winner - Congratulations.

Terry

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Robyn
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Re: The Farmers' Strike

Post by Robyn » Thu Dec 12, 2013 4:20 pm

Thanks Terry.
And Glenny, only in my head :!: :!: :lol: :lol:
Robyn Sykes, the Binalong Bard.

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