STAR GAZING

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Maureen K Clifford
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STAR GAZING

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Jul 28, 2014 4:32 pm

One I've played around with a bit - funnily enough it would probably suit our Homework Topic as well but I will try to do something else for that :lol:

STAR GAZING - Maureen Clifford © The Scribbly Bark Poet

Long, long ago there lived a man, far, far away from here.
and he appeared to be a bloke with whom you'd sink a beer.
He saw the world for what it was...it's beauty and delight.
He asked a question once about the stars we see at night.

He asked - ‘If stars were only seen once in a thousand years
would people sleep or would they weep or would they cringe in fear?
Would there be new religions started up by folks in fright
or would we be ecstatic at the Glory of Gods night?’


We see the whole world piece by piece, the sun and moon, the tree.
The whole, of which these are just parts, is deeper hid in thee.
The essence and the myriad things that makes the world a whole,
resides away from prying eyes within you...it's your soul.

You have to think I do suppose on questions such as these.
For don't we take for granted, the rivers, seas and trees?
Do we perceive the beauty that surrounds us every minute
and realize it's beautiful, as we are living in it?

Chances are good we don't my friends, we live here every day.
But how we wonder and proclaim when e'er we go away.
We rave about the scenic view, or crisp clean mountain air,
and just look at those gardens . Oh how wonderful to share.

We all take photos we can post on web sites when we're back
to show where we’ve been, what we've done, and how we got the knack
of camel riding, hang gliding, boogie boarding too
but do we take a minute to appreciate our view.

Ralph Waldo Emerson the man, ‘twas he inspired this verse.
Philosopher and poet, abolitionist, sad cursed.
A man who asked what we would do if stars were rarely seen.
Each night the heavens glow with stars – we watch stars on the screen.
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Re: STAR GAZING

Post by Terry » Mon Jul 28, 2014 7:48 pm

Hi Maureen,
One of the great pleasures of being way out in remote areas far from distracting city lights,
is to while away an evening beneath a beautiful starry sky; by all means lets wax lyrical about the beauty of the bush - but you could say much the same about the sky on a clear dark night.

Terry

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Re: STAR GAZING

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Jul 28, 2014 8:38 pm

I suppose that's the question Maureen. Do we find the universal by first understanding the particulars or understand the particulars only when we have first recognised the universal. If you know what I mean. :roll: :)
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Re: STAR GAZING

Post by alongtimegone » Tue Jul 29, 2014 2:43 pm

I liked that a lot Maureen.
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Re: STAR GAZING

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Jul 29, 2014 8:57 pm

Thanks fellows- appreciate your kind comments. Happy you saw the picture :D
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Re: STAR GAZING

Post by Heather » Sat Aug 02, 2014 11:37 am

Really lovely Maureen. A reminder to stop and take it all in.

Heather :)

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