An evening walk

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Neville Briggs
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Re: An evening walk

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Sep 11, 2014 1:13 pm

make that any lady. :roll:
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Re: An evening walk

Post by Terry » Thu Sep 11, 2014 3:44 pm

I agree with the others Neville.

Well done indeed.

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Re: An evening walk

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Sep 11, 2014 4:56 pm

Thanks Terry :) .
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Re: An evening walk

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Thu Sep 11, 2014 5:49 pm

Should it not finish with a "?"?
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Re: An evening walk

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Sep 11, 2014 7:03 pm

Originally I had question marks. A lot of poems that I read pose questions without using question marks, so I don't know whether they are required in verse.
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Re: An evening walk

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Thu Sep 11, 2014 7:55 pm

I don't imagine there are any strict rules about it. You can do whatever you like.
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Re: An evening walk

Post by Bob Pacey » Sat Sep 13, 2014 5:11 am

Just write em and let them have a life of their own Neville.

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