Jimmy's on the Mall

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Jimmy's on the Mall

Post by manfredvijars » Thu May 07, 2015 10:47 am

Jimmy's on the Mall
(c) 2006 - Manfred Vijars
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Re: Jimmy's on the Mall

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu May 07, 2015 11:59 am

I always loved Jimmy's when I was working in Brisbane - it is a great place to people spot - Love your observations in this poem - verray kewel
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Re: Jimmy's on the Mall

Post by Cropduster » Fri May 08, 2015 5:46 am

Free the muffintops!......but beware the hormones on the prowl.

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Re: Jimmy's on the Mall

Post by Heather » Fri May 08, 2015 8:22 am

I can see the sprayed on jeans, the muffin tops and heels. Give them a few years and they will wonder what they were thinking!
You set the scene well Manfred.

Heather :)
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Re: Jimmy's on the Mall

Post by manfredvijars » Fri May 08, 2015 6:45 pm

Thank you Heather, Allan, Mausie ... :D
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Re: Jimmy's on the Mall

Post by Neville Briggs » Sun May 10, 2015 2:47 pm

Who's this scowling Mr Plod ??

I don't know the place but I get the picture Manfred. :)
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Re: Jimmy's on the Mall

Post by Catherine Lee » Sun May 10, 2015 9:18 pm

Very enjoyable Mannie - I've never been but can see it so clearly - loved the muffin tops!
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Re: Jimmy's on the Mall

Post by Heather » Sun May 10, 2015 10:36 pm

It's not a term you hear so much these days. Maybe clothing styles have changed and the muffins are safely contained.
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Re: Jimmy's on the Mall

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon May 11, 2015 6:04 am

Replaced by see through stretch leggings grooooooooane



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