A New Year Resolution

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David Campbell
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A New Year Resolution

Post by David Campbell » Fri Jan 01, 2016 1:14 pm

A New Year Resolution

Those New Year resolutions
don’t hang around too long,
and no-one has solutions
for hopes that go so wrong.

The promises keep drifting
like mist in winter sun,
perspectives always shifting
on when we’ll get things done.

But when it comes to writing,
let’s try to change the score…
on paper or reciting,
let’s do a whole lot more!

So take this random minute
bestowed by Father Time,
and bloody well begin it…
a carnival of rhyme!

© David Campbell 01/01/16

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Re: A New Year Resolution

Post by Neville Briggs » Fri Jan 01, 2016 4:46 pm

David Campbell wrote:a carnival of rhyme!
Interesting image. :roll: :)
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Re: A New Year Resolution

Post by David Campbell » Sat Jan 02, 2016 11:17 am

An expansion of that image, Neville!

A carnival/fiesta/
fete/gala/jamboree
is far from a siesta,
and much more like a spree,
a joyous celebration
of poetry’s effect,
a cheer of acclamation,
encouraging respect.

David (02/01/16)

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Re: A New Year Resolution

Post by Neville Briggs » Sat Jan 02, 2016 4:10 pm

umm...right . :shock:
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Re: A New Year Resolution

Post by Shelley Hansen » Sun Jan 03, 2016 9:10 pm

Hear! Hear! Let the rhymes begin ... :D
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