My Dreamtime

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Dave Smith
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Re: My Dreamtime

Post by Dave Smith » Sun Aug 05, 2012 7:24 pm

Good one Ross, as the others have said a great sentiment and so true.

TTFN 8-)
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Neville Briggs
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Re: My Dreamtime

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Aug 06, 2012 8:19 am

r.magnay wrote:..yeah right Neville...don't push me mate!...


:shock: Sorry Ross I don't understand ? I think you have taken me wrong, I wasn't pushing or referring to spelling.
Neville
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r.magnay
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Re: My Dreamtime

Post by r.magnay » Mon Aug 06, 2012 9:27 am

No Neville, I know you didn't refer to the spelling, but I did know it was wrong and thought you possibly noticed it...I corrected it when I saw your post with the correct spelling (phenomenon) :oops:...I was just being a unit regarding the fact that you kept bringing up the reference to nature being characterised as a being or a person as opposed to a phenomenon.....don't worry about me...I'll get over it!... ;)

Where's the Doc? I have left myself open for a rebuttle from him regarding his feelings about the word "Mate", using it in that context too..... :lol:
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Re: My Dreamtime

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Aug 06, 2012 2:51 pm

Quite a well done poem. Good to see you having a go.

I think it's a good idea to have another look at past efforts, whether they have been revised or not, why should our members efforts just be forgotten?
And we have new members who may not have seen the earlier posts.

I'll leave it at that. ;) :D
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

Heather

Re: My Dreamtime

Post by Heather » Mon Aug 06, 2012 9:33 pm

You having one of those weeks Ross? :lol: ;)

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Re: My Dreamtime

Post by r.magnay » Tue Aug 07, 2012 6:55 am

Looks like it Heather!....thank you all for your comments...good and not so good ;)
Ross

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Re: My Dreamtime

Post by Dennis N O'Brien » Wed Aug 08, 2012 10:22 am

Very good - I like it.

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