When The Frangipani Blooms

[Bob Pacey]

Hi Sue hows retirement. bet you miss the lead up to Christmas in the park .


So many colours now Shelley pity they only last for a little while.


They do grow well from cutting though and ya can nick em over the fence if ya quick LOL.


Bob

[william williams]

Sometimes you just have to see the pig picture and let the little things slide by Mausie.

good Bob but what is a pig picture

bw

[Neville Briggs]

Maybe it's one of those paintings by Francis Bacon.

[Bob Pacey]

Let those who are without fault cast the first stone !


no wonder not many people post anymore is all I can say.

[Neville Briggs]

Who's casting stones ??

This being a poetry site and poetry being a word game, it's part of the game that people will make comments about words, I don't think there is any personal malice, just the old Aussie ribbing. There's no need for anyone to take offense.
It keeps me on my toes, I try to be as careful as I can about spelling and typing and grammar because I know I'll get found out and someone is likely to make a comment and probably a joke at my expense, ( it has happened ) part of the game.

[william williams]

Bob how many time have you corrected me and others about our spelling

Bill w

[Heather]

I don't see any stones. noice BoB. purty picture too. my puter is plyig up d I c't type three letters of the lphet so my spelling is pretty loody wful right ow

[alongtimegone]

Top one Bob. Sounds like a great place to live.
Wazza

[Bob Pacey]

Thanks all

Yes Sue and Shelley I can smell the scent every time I read this poem.



What's in a name you say !


Bob

[Maureen K Clifford]

I hope you don't think I was ever being horrible to you Bob - certainly never the intention I am just a bit passionate about presentation of work to the public. As an ex supermarket manager I bet you got cranky if staff overlooked rotting fruit in a display and probably read them the riot act on presentation if they did - and if meat was past its use by date and not at its best, you probably marked down the price for a quick sale.

After the hard work our poets put into crafting a piece I personally hate to think it would get either marked down or thrown into the rubbish because of an oversight that can be so simply fixed

I see you have amended the poem anyway giving it a little extra polish