Valleys of Veges and Fountains of Fruit
- Stephen Whiteside
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Re: Valleys of Veges and Fountains of Fruit
No, worddancer, I won't change it any more. I'm really pleased you enjoyed it so much. It was an exercise, really - start with a completely blank mind, and see what happens. This is the complete opposite of my normal approach, which is to do a lot of pretty serious thinking before I begin to put pen to paper - so it's good for me. Pushes my envelope a little. It's risky, but also fun to see if my subconscious eventually turns something up - and if so, what! For a while I thought about chopping out some of the earlier verses so I could cut to the chase more quickly, but when I had a closer look at it, I saw it was all very organically bound, and not very easy at all...so I just decided to leave it alone, as you suggest.
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
http://www.stephenwhiteside.com.au
http://www.stephenwhiteside.com.au
- worddancer
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Re: Valleys of Veges and Fountains of Fruit
Thank you Stephen For considering my plea.
Such visual, artist, inspirational visions; pencils and paint are jumping out of their containers...; me first, no me!
worddancer
Such visual, artist, inspirational visions; pencils and paint are jumping out of their containers...; me first, no me!
worddancer
It's never to late; just do it
I'll set pen to paper
Write now, not later
And post it so others may view it
Word dancer is happy
I'll set pen to paper
Write now, not later
And post it so others may view it
Word dancer is happy
- Stephen Whiteside
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Re: Valleys of Veges and Fountains of Fruit
Go for it!
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
http://www.stephenwhiteside.com.au
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Re: Valleys of Veges and Fountains of Fruit
cool!
Now I'm going to sea to see those skeletons I hear about,
Worddancer
Now I'm going to sea to see those skeletons I hear about,
Worddancer
It's never to late; just do it
I'll set pen to paper
Write now, not later
And post it so others may view it
Word dancer is happy
I'll set pen to paper
Write now, not later
And post it so others may view it
Word dancer is happy