ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

Great yarn and well written Marty!

Vic

Yes I also think it is a great yarn and well written - found a typo you might want to fix- he made the combs sing through and with your punctuation " and " indicating speech they only need to be at beginning and the ending of the talking part, not each sentence, and the punctuation overall needs a bit of spit and polish, ( I know picky, picky) but this is really good and I would hate you to maybe loose out on a comp or some such just because you had these wrongly placed.

Read it again and it is good.

Cheers

Maureen

It's great Marty. Really great! You are improving no end lately. I reckon spit and polish and into a comp too.

Heather

I KNEW it was snowing somewhere today! So, so cold here too. I think Melbourne was expecting a top of 11 degrees. Reckon it was about to snow in Kilmore this afternoon - sky as black as slate and air so cold it hurt to breathe.

Heather

Ah you poor buggers it got to a low 22 degrees today even had kids in the pool. all the victorians with their number plates Victoria The Place To Be and they are all up here.



Bob

Snowing in Ballarat today. Knew it...

Never seen snow oh well i did get a bit of white stuff come out of the fridge when I left the door ajar overnight.


Not long now Heather better bring your kini.


Bob

Bob respectable ladies who have had four chidren do not own "Kinis" thank you.

Take it to the weather forum now Bobbo!

It's brilliant Marty. Not many longish poems keep my attention but this one did. (Still got to get back to you on this one but been a tad busy).

Heather

This is a beauty Marty, love it eh!