ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

A potent brew I can vouch for after 14 years in the vehicle reapair industry Marty. Have not read the original and this seems a little straight to the point. I think with a bit of poetic tickle up it would make a true but entertaining yarn or poem.

Cheers Bob Bet you spent some time in the dog house for that.

I think they put that stuff in the cheap plonk at Woolies. better keep it away from the chickens.

Thanks for the laugh Marty.

Heather

As much as the original 'chicken coop incident' was funny, I agree with Bob, that with a bit of a touch-up this would make a funny little cracker.

Cheers, Marty (the other one . . who doesn't make an art form out of 'chicken expiry')

Go on marty have a go at sprucing it up

Bob

Some ideas chooks scraping their bums on the ground or a turbo fired up rooster

Bob

It's about right as is, Marty . . . maybe just tighten up the metre a bit - and at a dozen lines it's one you can memorize quickly and belt out at the next Laggan Pub session.

I love it too Marty and agree with nice Marty that it just needs a tweek here and there. Let us see it when you have (please).