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Spring
Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 9:46 pm
by Heather
Short and sweet! Been experimenting.
Re: Spring
Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 10:18 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Beautiful Heather - lifts the spirits straight away - wattle prompted????
Re: Spring
Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 7:51 am
by Bob Pacey
Short, sweet, yes and also very descriptive.
Wattle you think of next ???
Robert Alan.
Re: Spring
Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 8:35 am
by Neville Briggs
Excellent , Heather

I'm most impressed. It makes you want to read it over again and again like a little happy chorus.
Re: Spring
Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 10:24 am
by Terry
Lovely little Poem Heather.
I replied to this last night but my post has disappeared again, could it be gremlins?
Terry
Re: Spring
Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:05 pm
by Heather
I knew you'd get it Neville.
Thanks all for your kind comments. I'll let you into a little secret. I was experimenting/playing around with a poem I wrote a week or so ago and also looking at Henry Kendall's Bellbirds and decided that I could make something else out of some of the lines - and then added a couple, changed a couple - you know how it goes! I was trying to cut out the "and" and "a's". Below is the original. Both basically the same material (one shorter obviously) but using a different way of presenting it.
I'm finding that I like to write poems that can describe with fewer rather than more words.
Well, it keeps me off the streets....
Re: Spring
Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:15 pm
by Heather
Maureen, wattle and apple blossom prompted. I'll find a picture of the apple blossom from last year. She's in bud now - can't wait!
apple blossom.jpg
Re: Spring
Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 2:12 pm
by Bob Pacey
Must be a BBBBBIIIIGGGG Tree.
Yahoo Bob
Re: Spring
Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 2:17 pm
by Heather
It's a magnificent tree Bob. It was here when we came and didn't grow for years and years until I eventually threatened to take it out and then it grew almost overnight! In the summer it provides a lovely spot to sit in the shade. In spring it has the most gorgeous blossom. It also provides the bees with nectar and the birds a safe place to hide. The bird bath sits under it. Glad I didn't pull it out.

Re: Spring
Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 3:28 pm
by Heather
An oldie but a goodie hey Marty!
