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OUR BILL

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 11:54 am
by Neville Briggs
a bit of a tribute to the oldest member of the Singleton Bush Poets.


OUR BILL


Our Bill was a horseman,
a bush drover too,
far away from his boyhood
at Woolloomooloo.
He learnt at the campfires
from hand-written sheets
and committed to memory
line upon line;
the old rhyming ballads
he still loved and knew.
Now, at eighty five years,
sadly, Bill's gone to answer
to that mystic presence,
the great higher-power.
Yes it's true folks, it is,
as sure as I speak,
Bill went out and guess what,
he got married last week.

Re: OUR BILL

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 11:57 am
by Heather
Funny Neville! :lol: :lol:

Re: OUR BILL

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 11:59 am
by Stephen Whiteside
Is there a pattern to this rhyme, Neville, or are you just following your nose?

Re: OUR BILL

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:00 pm
by Neville Briggs
True story Heather, Bill hailed me down town this morning and proudly introduced me to his new wife. :D

G'day Stephen. Who knows, it's the the nose, I suppose. :roll:

Re: OUR BILL

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:02 pm
by Heather
Good luck to him Neville. How "new" is the wife Neville?

Re: OUR BILL

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:07 pm
by Neville Briggs
They got married last Friday. A very nice lady in his age group I think, other than that, I don't wish to know. ;)

Re: OUR BILL

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:13 pm
by Heather
:lol:

Re: OUR BILL

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 1:03 pm
by Bob Pacey
Good luck to them I say. Not everyone can take a girls breath away ???? :roll: :roll: :roll: We can but try.

Got the message but the poem ????? Poem ????

Nah




Bob

Re: OUR BILL

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 1:14 pm
by Stephen Whiteside
Yes, funny poem Neville. I didn't see it coming!

Re: OUR BILL

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 3:27 pm
by Neville Briggs
Thanks for the replies Heather, Stephen. Bob.

I gather you find fault with my piece Bob, what exactly is the fault that you see?

I revised the metre a bit since your comment.