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BY THE LAGOON

Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 11:08 pm
by mummsie
BY THE LAGOON

Sue Pearce©

Beneath the shade of willow trees,
your gentle waters, glisten, tease
and beckon wild geese, join me please
come rest your weary wings.

Quiet solitude and peace you bring,
'neath trees now lush with growth of spring,
caressing in the shade they bring
a yen to linger there.

The dewdrops of the early morn,
like silver beads, they cling, adorn
the veinlike growth of ferns, newborn
to natures wondrous ways.

Soft ripples form and spread they grow,
what wonders do they hide below,
through dappled shadows I'll not know,
your secrets safe from me.

Then from nowhere a soft breeze sings
a mellow sigh and with it brings,
sheer gossamer, elusive wings
of dragonflys at play.

Where native swans, soft feathers preen
and swamp frogs chorus, intervene
on Mother Nature, so serene,
resplendant in each way.

When twilight heralds end of day,
the full moon's shadows softly play,
as opalescent beams display,
a tranquil, peaceful scene.

Re: BY THE LAGOON

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:32 am
by Neville Briggs
EXCELLENT SUE !!! APPLAUSE AND CHEERS.




( last stanza.."full moon's" and "tranquil ". Sorry . :oops: It was so good it needed that last lick to make it just right )

Re: BY THE LAGOON

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:58 am
by mummsie
Thank you Neville.
Oops, : :oops: spelling isn't my thing I'm sure you know. Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.

Cheers
Sue

Re: BY THE LAGOON

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:06 am
by william williams
good one sue nice and soft and gentle

bill w

Re: BY THE LAGOON

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:15 am
by Heather
Beautiful Sue. Love it.

Heather :)

Re: BY THE LAGOON

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:24 am
by Bob Pacey
Paints a lovely picture Sue. Do not get them up here just big round waterholes of muddy water contaminated by the pump out of salty water by the mines !!!

The price of progress I don't think.


Bob

Re: BY THE LAGOON

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:35 am
by mummsie
Thank you Bill and Heather.
Bob, we are very fortunate to have one right here in town. This past week I've taken the time to just sit and observe. This poem is the result of those observations.
Glad you enjoyed it. :) :)
[I'm a bit of a nature freak :D ]
Cheers
Sue

Re: BY THE LAGOON

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:41 am
by Bob Pacey
I would not say Freak Sue. maybe Buff might fit. Oh hang on that has two meanings as well.

Lets just say you like nature. ;) ;) ;)


Bob

Re: BY THE LAGOON

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:27 am
by Terry
Beautifully descriptive Sue.

Terry

Re: BY THE LAGOON

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:44 am
by mummsie
Thank you Terry. :)

Sue