Tale of a Snake
Consider the snake, known to us as Joe Blake,
He's friendless and armless and legless and shy.
We'll kill him on sight, but I wouldn't know why,
Please show some compassion and give him a break.
It wasn't his choice to be born as a snake,
It happened; so now he just wants to have fun.
He doesn't vote leftist, or the other one,
And doesn't burn heretics, live at the stake.
If you were a snake wouldn't you want to be
Self-actualised, tolerant, natural, free.
To other snakes, those are his virtues; you see ?
Tale of a Snake
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Tale of a Snake
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
Re: Tale of a Snake
Great to shed some poetic light on the much maligned serpent.
I've always been on the side of the snake Nev. They're basically blind and deaf yet rely on their primitive reptilian senses to survive.
Once you get beyond that perfectly natural fear (of potential death) and appreciate the stark beauty of the snake . . .
make sure you've got plenty of anti-venom on hand
Anyone read Kym's Trouser Snake poem? There's a lesson in that one!!
Cheers, Marty
I've always been on the side of the snake Nev. They're basically blind and deaf yet rely on their primitive reptilian senses to survive.
Once you get beyond that perfectly natural fear (of potential death) and appreciate the stark beauty of the snake . . .


Anyone read Kym's Trouser Snake poem? There's a lesson in that one!!
Cheers, Marty
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Re: Tale of a Snake
morning Neville,
OK,I'll bite first.... where is the fourth line in stanza three? or am I missing something?
OK,I'll bite first.... where is the fourth line in stanza three? or am I missing something?
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Re: Tale of a Snake
Thanks Marty, not a good idea to get up too close and personal with those Taipans up your way.
Ahh Zondrae, aren't you interested in nature ? ( check the rhyming scheme
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Ahh Zondrae, aren't you interested in nature ? ( check the rhyming scheme

Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
Re: Tale of a Snake
Marty, you must have me confused with someone else.
I would never write a poem along those lines.
I'm a good girl. Really. 


