Tale of a Snake

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Neville Briggs
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Tale of a Snake

Post by Neville Briggs » Sun Oct 30, 2011 9:40 am

Tale of a Snake


Consider the snake, known to us as Joe Blake,
He's friendless and armless and legless and shy.
We'll kill him on sight, but I wouldn't know why,
Please show some compassion and give him a break.

It wasn't his choice to be born as a snake,
It happened; so now he just wants to have fun.
He doesn't vote leftist, or the other one,
And doesn't burn heretics, live at the stake.

If you were a snake wouldn't you want to be
Self-actualised, tolerant, natural, free.
To other snakes, those are his virtues; you see ?
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

warooa

Re: Tale of a Snake

Post by warooa » Sun Oct 30, 2011 9:23 pm

Great to shed some poetic light on the much maligned serpent.

I've always been on the side of the snake Nev. They're basically blind and deaf yet rely on their primitive reptilian senses to survive.

Once you get beyond that perfectly natural fear (of potential death) and appreciate the stark beauty of the snake . . . :? make sure you've got plenty of anti-venom on hand :roll:

Anyone read Kym's Trouser Snake poem? There's a lesson in that one!!

Cheers, Marty

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Re: Tale of a Snake

Post by Zondrae » Mon Oct 31, 2011 8:53 am

morning Neville,

OK,I'll bite first.... where is the fourth line in stanza three? or am I missing something?
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Re: Tale of a Snake

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Oct 31, 2011 1:29 pm

Thanks Marty, not a good idea to get up too close and personal with those Taipans up your way.


Ahh Zondrae, aren't you interested in nature ? ( check the rhyming scheme ;) )
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

Kym

Re: Tale of a Snake

Post by Kym » Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:07 pm

Marty, you must have me confused with someone else. :o I would never write a poem along those lines. :shock: I'm a good girl. Really. :roll:

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