An easy mornings run

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Maureen K Clifford
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Re: An easy mornings run

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Dec 02, 2011 1:52 pm

Love it Marty - it's a pearler :lol: :lol: :lol: Gotta keep your powder- puffs dry :roll: :roll: Shearing Rams with a hang over - bet the rams were nervous. :lol: :lol:
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Re: An easy mornings run

Post by mummsie » Fri Dec 02, 2011 2:41 pm

Yes, a goodun Marty.


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Re: An easy mornings run

Post by Neville Briggs » Fri Dec 02, 2011 3:10 pm

That's a good bush yarn. :)
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Re: An easy mornings run

Post by Bob Pacey » Fri Dec 02, 2011 3:52 pm

A good story line Marty but I felt it needed another verse before the last to finish it off, maybe a little embelishment of Shannons reaction to finding out what the job was ? Just a suggestion ? Tell me to sod off if you like I'm used to it !!! :P :P :P


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