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Think of Me Gently When I'm Gone
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:29 am
by manfredvijars
Think of Me Gently When I'm Gone
(c) 2005 Manfred Vijars.
Re: Think of Me Gently When I'm Gone
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 11:09 am
by Maureen K Clifford
Lovely tribute Mannie - we see them through different eyes I think when they are gone.
Cheers
Maureen
Re: Think of Me Gently When I'm Gone
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 4:48 pm
by Neville Briggs
Good on ya Manfred.
I would be interested to see, if you ever decided to do it, either another version of that theme or added stanzas in between those, with concrete examples of what you are referring to.
Re: Think of Me Gently When I'm Gone
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 6:49 pm
by manfredvijars
Thanks Mausie, Nev.
I used the 'helicopter' view on this one for a more universal appeal.
Getting too personal and specific is the 'lawnmower' view, and clumps of smelly churned up grass is not so pretty ...

Re: Think of Me Gently When I'm Gone
Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 11:02 am
by Heather
Manfred were you flying the helicopter?
Nice read.
Re: Think of Me Gently When I'm Gone
Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 11:21 am
by manfredvijars
... I usually end up pretty grubby from trying to fix the mower Heather ...

Re: Think of Me Gently When I'm Gone
Posted: Wed Feb 29, 2012 5:32 am
by Stephen Whiteside
Helicopters? Lawnmowers? All that noise! All that petrol! Just to write a poem...
Re: Think of Me Gently When I'm Gone
Posted: Wed Feb 29, 2012 5:53 am
by Stephen Whiteside
Well, Manny's in his chopper,
And the world is far beneath.
He is working on a poem,
So he's steering with his teeth.
On his knee's a piece of paper.
It is flapping in the breeze.
A pen is in his hand but
He is managing with ease.
A line a litre, that's the rate
Of petrol for his muse.
You couldn't say the thing was cheap.
But what's he got to lose?
Money. Time. Perhaps his life.
His biro and his pad.
The poem that he's wrestling with.
I hope it's just a fad.
I hope that Manny comes to earth,
Gentle-like, and slow,
And comes to see that desk and chair's
The safer way to go...
Re: Think of Me Gently When I'm Gone
Posted: Wed Feb 29, 2012 11:55 am
by Heather

Thanks for the laugh Stephen. I can just imagine Manny doing that.
