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IN THAT ROOM WITHIN THOSE WALLS

Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 11:40 pm
by mummsie
In That Room Within Those Walls
Sue Pearce © July 2012

They smile and hold each other in a gentle, warm embrace
as they cross the open threshold to the old stone fireplace.
Where the warmth of flames soon flicker and a glow surrounds the room,
falling softly on the faces of the newfound bride and groom.
Nestled snuggly in the cabin as the night sky gently falls,
making plans towards their future, in that room within those walls.


Plans to hear the cry of babies in the years ahead; denied,
Tears of grievance shed together, not just one but three had died.
As they held the lifeless newborns to the Lord they pleaded, why?
For their faith was surely questioned when there came not one reply.
And three tiny crosses glisten, when the moon's soft shadow falls,
and two lonely hearts were grieving, in that room within those walls.

As the years rolled by each other, many storm clouds passed their way,
but their love and strength would always find them there at end of day.
By the glow of flames still burning after more than forty years,
they would sit beside the fire sharing laughter, fun and tears.
Telling tales of life and mateship, how the joy of life enthralls,
as the flames were slowly dimming, in that room within those walls.

Now the fire glows no longer and the room is dark and bare,
For the flames that once burned brightly are now gone; no longer there.
Where once hearts entwined together by the warming fireside,
still the voices whisper softly of a groom and his young bride.
Now while five white crosses glisten as the moon's soft shadow falls,
There's a sense that souls still linger, in that room within those walls.

Re: IN THAT ROOM WITHIN THOSE WALLS

Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:23 am
by Maureen K Clifford
Beautiful Sue -touches the heart with its honest simplicity :cry:

Re: IN THAT ROOM WITHIN THOSE WALLS

Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:20 am
by william williams
dam good sue as always

bill the old battler

Re: IN THAT ROOM WITHIN THOSE WALLS

Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 10:04 am
by Dennis N O'Brien
Very good Sue - well written

Re: IN THAT ROOM WITHIN THOSE WALLS

Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 11:56 am
by Neville Briggs
Good on you Sue.

Re: IN THAT ROOM WITHIN THOSE WALLS

Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 12:08 pm
by Rimeriter
Heart wrentching.

"Thank you for a marvellous writing".
Jim.

Re: IN THAT ROOM WITHIN THOSE WALLS

Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 12:20 pm
by Heather
Very nice Sue. It makes me want to know more..

Heather :)

Re: IN THAT ROOM WITHIN THOSE WALLS

Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 3:51 pm
by mummsie
Thank you everyone for the lovely comments, another write that simply came from nowhere.

Cheers
Sue

Re: IN THAT ROOM WITHIN THOSE WALLS

Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 8:40 pm
by Robyn
Another one that tugs at the heartstrings. You've got the formula all right!
Robyn

Re: IN THAT ROOM WITHIN THOSE WALLS

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:29 am
by Irene
Beautiful, Sue.