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Neville Briggs
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GOLD

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Jul 26, 2012 8:24 am

GOLD


I hab a bad gold, I feed sick
and by doze is awe sore add stubbed ub.
Blow be doze, blow be doze, blow be doze,
loads a messy use dissues bile ub.

Why day gall id a gold, I dundo,
gauze rye dow I jus feed priddy hod.
Blow be doze. blow be doze, blow be doze,
Wodda job do ged ridda dad snod.

I bead daken sub bills for debain
and rub smelly Vicks ober be chess.
Blow be doze, blow be doze, blow be doze,
I'll day rug dub imbed an juss ress.

I wooden wander ged you bone yer.
Neville
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Heather

Re: GOLD

Post by Heather » Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:02 am

:lol: Poor Nevie, you are sick aren't you? I can hear the misery.

Heather :)

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Re: GOLD

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Jul 26, 2012 1:48 pm

Poor Neville - hope you feel better soon :cry:

But the poem was great fun :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: GOLD

Post by Rimeriter » Thu Jul 26, 2012 2:24 pm

"OOHHHHHHH !

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Re: GOLD

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Jul 26, 2012 5:46 pm

Thanks for the sympathies ladies and Jim. I'm not sick fortunately, just being stupid. :mrgreen:
Neville
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Re: GOLD

Post by Dennis N O'Brien » Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:03 pm

:lol:

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Re: GOLD

Post by Robyn » Thu Jul 26, 2012 10:35 pm

Great use of language Neville! Glad to hear you are not really ill and hope you stay that way.
Regards
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Re: GOLD

Post by Heather » Thu Jul 26, 2012 10:49 pm

We knew that silly! It was funny.. :lol: (Not that you're stupid or anything Neville ;) )

Heather :)

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Re: GOLD

Post by warooa » Fri Jul 27, 2012 6:12 am

:lol: you bone yer - very flu-ently written, Nev.

Marty

ps. I though it might of been an Olympic poem ;)

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Re: GOLD

Post by Neville Briggs » Fri Jul 27, 2012 8:44 am

It could have been Marty, the Olympics tend to make me feel a bit nauseous. :mrgreen:
Neville
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