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Re: Harnessed up
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 8:00 am
by Neville Briggs
I like that. A slightly different approach , more towards a contemporary manner of verse.
Well done Marty. You are not thinking of joining the Amish are you
Re: Harnessed up
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 8:18 am
by Maureen K Clifford
I'm with Neville - I like the structure of this as well as the content, I think the somewhat clipped lines work well with the concept of the contest and the horse clip clopping along. Captures a slower paced time in life - interesting that you have time to observe the eagle possible something that would have gone unnoticed in a car journey, because unlike a car you don't have to concentrate as much on the steering
and thus have more time to observe and appreciate your surroundings
I enjoyed the read Marty - thank you
Cheers
Maureen
Re: Harnessed up
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 10:04 am
by Heather
The Amish wouldn't have him Neville - he's too flamboyant!
Nice one Marty.
Heather
Re: Harnessed up
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 10:37 am
by keats
Read the title and thought it might have been 50 Shades Of Marty.
Neil
Re: Harnessed up
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 5:08 pm
by Neville Briggs
Flamboyant, is that what they call it, Heather ?
Re: Harnessed up
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 5:16 pm
by Heather
Yup!
Re: Harnessed up
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 8:40 pm
by Bob Pacey
Keep that up and you will be able to get married soon Marty ??
Robere
Only if ya move to Tasmania though.