ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

It's a ripper Heather - really tugs at the heartstrings and so easy to visualize and feel the grief - I love these lines


nestled ‘round this earthly cradle,
a hem of bricks are sown in place.


Beautiful

Cheers

Maureen

Well done Heather.

Nice poem Heather - some very good lines in this.

Glad you like it Maureen. I had to "be there" to write this one..

As always Neville - thank you.

Thanks Dennis.

Heather

...welll on your way lassie...just lovely.
Glenny

Sad and beautiful Heather, says it all.
Robyn

Now that is poetry folks!!
Thank you Heather.

Sue

Thanks Robyn. It's based on a real grave and sad and reflective is exactly how it made me feel.

Glenny you can call me a lassie any time.

Thanks Sue. You've made my day..

Heather

Excellent Heather,

Terry