Life's Disappointments

ABPA Financial members can post their Bush Poetry here ...
All Forum Visitors can view but only Financial ABPA Members can post and reply.
Post Reply
Mariont3155

Life's Disappointments

Post by Mariont3155 » Sat Oct 27, 2012 10:21 am

I wrote this in a reflective moment when I was feeling a bit down...

Life's Disappointments


There's no point regretting what I might have been
If I lived my life over again
But I envy risk-takers; those people who've seen
Adventures beyond those of the pen.

What held me back was the courage to fly
Beyond the bounds of my home;
The walls that enclosed me I saw as too high
And I missed any chances to roam.

So focused was I on adhering to rules
And conventions one must not defy:
Marriage, security, children and schools
That excitement just passed me by.

There are so many things I'd like to have done
And knowledge that I might have gleaned;
Thrills untasted that would have been fun
But life, real life intervened.

Heather

Re: Life's Disappointments

Post by Heather » Sat Oct 27, 2012 10:25 am

I think a lot of people could relate to that Marion but you know, it's never too late to have even the smallest of adventures.

Heather :)

Neville Briggs
Posts: 6946
Joined: Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:08 pm
Location: Here

Re: Life's Disappointments

Post by Neville Briggs » Sat Oct 27, 2012 11:04 am

Interesting Marion.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

User avatar
Bob Pacey
Moderator
Posts: 7479
Joined: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:18 am
Location: Yeppoon

Re: Life's Disappointments

Post by Bob Pacey » Sat Oct 27, 2012 1:01 pm

Is that interesting poem Marion or Marion who is interesting Nev ?


Bob
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

Neville Briggs
Posts: 6946
Joined: Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:08 pm
Location: Here

Re: Life's Disappointments

Post by Neville Briggs » Sat Oct 27, 2012 3:52 pm

Marion is the poem isn't she ? ;)
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

Mariont3155

Re: Life's Disappointments

Post by Mariont3155 » Sat Oct 27, 2012 4:35 pm

Interesting question to an interesting question to an interesting comment.
I wonder what the answer is.

User avatar
Stephen Whiteside
Posts: 3784
Joined: Sat Nov 27, 2010 1:07 pm
Contact:

Re: Life's Disappointments

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Sat Oct 27, 2012 5:04 pm

Some of the biggest risks involve adventures 'of the pen'.
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
http://www.stephenwhiteside.com.au

Mariont3155

Re: Life's Disappointments

Post by Mariont3155 » Sat Oct 27, 2012 5:18 pm

Yes. Many's the time I have wished I could 'un-send' a message.

warooa

Re: Life's Disappointments

Post by warooa » Sat Oct 27, 2012 8:01 pm

As Heather said, Marion . . . it's never too late - don't let your regrets take place of your dreams.

Marty

Post Reply