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Good King Manfred V.

Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2012 11:58 am
by David Campbell
Good King Manfred V.

Good King Manfred V. set out through the mind of Stephen,
through a wilderness of doubt, rocky and uneven.
Questions loomed to left and right, rampant flights of fancy,
sudden shafts of blinding light, memories of Clancy.

“Bloody hell, this joint’s a mess, dunno what I’m doing,
I am lost, I quite confess, what’s this stuff he’s brewing?”
“Waccy baccy?” Maureen said. “Magic mushrooms cooking?”
Brenda peered inside his head: “My, that is strange-looking!”

“Quirky thoughts!” exclaimed our Bob. “Whimsy, dark and hazy.”
Neville said: “It’s just the job sends all doctors crazy!”
“Clouds of humour,” Zondrae cried, “oceans full of laughter,
chuckles floating with the tide, happiness thereafter.”

“Don’t forget the magazine,” Keats yelled, “there’s a deadline!
Search that mighty verse machine…find another headline!”
“Look!” said Irene. “Word-filled streams, forests full of phrases.”
Vic saw wild, marauding dreams: “Time to run like blazes!”

“Good hot bath will do the trick. Trust me!” said Leonie.
“No,” cried Kymmie. “Here’s my pick…give the man a pony!”
Marty’s 1 and 2 chimed in: “Bloody southern weather
rots the brain far worse than gin…please don’t hurt us, Heather!”

Glenny laughed “We’re all quite mad, with our love of po’ing,
yet there’s all the fun we’ve had…keeps the party going!”
Terry, Bill and Dave cried: “Yay!”; Peely, Ross: “We, too, cheer!”
“All the best for Christmas Day and a happy New Year!”

© David C. 22/12/12

Re: Good King Manfred V.

Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2012 12:27 pm
by Stephen Whiteside
Wow! That's great!

Re: Good King Manfred V.

Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2012 1:10 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Better than great :) its fanbloodytastic

Good on you David - great fun

Re: Good King Manfred V.

Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2012 4:19 pm
by Neville Briggs
:lol:

Re: Good King Manfred V.

Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2012 5:00 pm
by manfredvijars
.... heyyyy, wazzup Man(hic) ... :lol:

Re: Good King Manfred V.

Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2012 9:29 pm
by Peely
Good Stuff, David

Regards


John Peel

Re: Good King Manfred V.

Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2012 9:58 pm
by william williams
con grats david and to one and all merry (hic) christmaaaaaassssss bill zzzzzzz

Re: Good King Manfred V.

Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2012 8:06 am
by David Campbell
Thanks Stephen, Maureen, Neville, John and Bill.

Manfred: Still lost in Stephen's head? Here's a tip: ignore the compass!

Verse four is new.

Re: Good King Manfred V.

Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2012 8:20 am
by manfredvijars
Goodonya David - Well done .... :D

Re: Good King Manfred V.

Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2012 2:25 am
by Irene
Love it, Dave!!!
A very merry christmas to everyone and a great new year!!!

Catchya
Irene