Rabbits Revenge -rewrite

[william williams]

good Marty but last line

I think it should be

I can tell you they have far more bite than bark

one night my mate was a gentleman and turned his back to have a ? and hit the electric fence Have you ever heard a Bunyip howl well everybody in the district heard one that night

bill the old battler

[Neville Briggs]

What did you re-write ? It reads fine to me anyway, whatever you did.