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Re: Rabbits Revenge -rewrite

Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 3:10 pm
by william williams
good Marty but last line

I think it should be

I can tell you they have far more bite than bark

one night my mate was a gentleman and turned his back to have a ? and hit the electric fence Have you ever heard a Bunyip howl well everybody in the district heard one that night

bill the old battler

Re: Rabbits Revenge -rewrite

Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 3:28 pm
by Neville Briggs
What did you re-write ? It reads fine to me anyway, whatever you did. :)