FORGIVENESS

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Neville Briggs
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FORGIVENESS

Post by Neville Briggs » Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:29 pm

" Forgiveness" is our latest topic for our local writers group

I found it very hard, abstract.

I based my poem ( a triolet ) on the lines from the Lord's Prayer
" Forgive us our debts as we also have forgiven our debtors "


FORGIVENESS

By grace we find forgiveness,
where grace in us is found.
Our deeds will stand as witness,
for grace to work forgiveness.
The debts we owe are countless;
why hold our debtors bound ?
By grace we give forgiveness,
and grace for us is found.


Neville Briggs.
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Maureen K Clifford
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Re: FORGIVENESS

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Sep 02, 2011 3:35 pm

Something we all need from time to time and Neville's triolet cleverly captures the essence.
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