Old Wheat Bag

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SallyHopkins

Old Wheat Bag

Post by SallyHopkins » Thu Jun 27, 2013 2:42 pm

A call in the dark and I was awake,
A day of woodcutting with my Dad, what a lucky break!

I dressed with excitement for the day ahead,
I gulped down my porridge and got a kiss on my head.

The sun was just breaking as we left for the day,
All piled in the truck, men for work and children for play.

As the light broke in the heavens, the sun warming the ground,
I watched the big reds jump across the dusty mound.

Then a call from out of the blue that we were close to our fields,
And to get ourselves ready for our daily deals.

I readied myself with excitement and prepared for the stop,
Looking down my little heart sank because of what I had forgot.

Two bare feet looked up at me, they were not prepared for this day,
They were out and free and I couldn’t go back as this day was well underway.

My father turned to check on me but what could I say,
Who forgets their shoes, you wear them every day.

The children left the truck and ran wild, happy and free,
Their squeals of excitement echoed in and out of the ghost gum trees.

The men unpacked their tools and started with their work,
My dad looked at the children and noticed I was not running berserk.

He turned to the truck and called for me to join the kids in their fun,
I just tried to disappear because of the sadness of what I had done.

I looked at the burrs and considered the pain,
At the ripe old age of 5 it was just too much to contain.

My eyes filled with tears, this day would be very long,
My father then asked me: “Johnny, what’s wrong?”

I showed him my feet and he said “That’s nothing bad,
We will soon fix that little problem with an old wheat bag”.

With needle and string, a stitch here and there,
He made me two shoes that were far beyond compare.

The rest of the day is quite a blur,
My handmade shoes maybe gone but I concur:

Things will go wrong, mistakes will be made but love is what sews it together and keeps things from going astray. :D

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Re: Old Wheat Bag

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Jun 27, 2013 4:10 pm

Goodonya Sally. Good to see a newcomer having a go.
I haven't tried shoes made of bags. :lol:
Neville
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Re: Old Wheat Bag

Post by SallyHopkins » Thu Jun 27, 2013 4:49 pm

matt wrote:always a bit scarey setting anything free to fend for itself Sal, espically the first time.
i reckon brave is one of the most important bits of setting thought to words...so the rest'll come easy
Now that is the truth!

SallyHopkins

Re: Old Wheat Bag

Post by SallyHopkins » Thu Jun 27, 2013 4:50 pm

Neville Briggs wrote:Goodonya Sally. Good to see a newcomer having a go.
I haven't tried shoes made of bags. :lol:
Thank you for the welcome Neville ;)

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Re: Old Wheat Bag

Post by mummsie » Thu Jun 27, 2013 5:26 pm

Great to see you posting Sally, you've taken the first step, now try another.
Welcome on board. There are some wonderful, helpful poets here who will guide you with your writing. Where you take it to is entirely up to you, but believe me, the sky's the limit.

Good Luck
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Re: Old Wheat Bag

Post by william williams » Thu Jun 27, 2013 9:28 pm

good luck to you sally wheat bag slippers aren't to bad on a shearing shed floor either

bill the old battler

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Re: Old Wheat Bag

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Jun 27, 2013 9:29 pm

Whoo Hoo - Sally has found her wings - the sky's the limit now girl :lol: Good to see you posting - I was reminded of Dolly Partons song Coat of many colours
My coat of many colors
That my momma made for me
Made only from rags
But I wore it so proudly
Although we had no money
I was rich as I could be
In my coat of many colors
My momma made for me
Wheat bag shoes made with love - great story

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Re: Old Wheat Bag

Post by Bob Pacey » Fri Jun 28, 2013 6:24 pm

Cheers Sally Good to see you posting.

Have a read of the tips on the home page and that will get you started.


Good luck

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