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The Jelly Bean Mine

Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2014 9:36 am
by Stephen Whiteside
The Jelly Bean Mine

It's cold down there in the jelly bean mine.
It's cold and it's dark, and it isn't a joy,
But the men still go,
With a shovel and hoe,
For the pleasure of each little girl and boy.

It's wet down there in the jelly bean mine.
It's wet and it's dark, and the hours are long,
But the men don't shirk.
They will eagerly work
For a grandchild's smile, or a snatch of song.

I've been down there in the jelly bean mine.
I've stood in line with my barrow and pick.
I curse at my plight,
But I beam at the sight
Of a barrow of beans, and my heart beats quick.

If you go down to the jelly bean mine,
Remember you won't be there forever.
It's a long, hard track,
But you will look back
With a well-earned pride at your great endeavour.

Stephen Whiteside 01.03.2014

Re: The Jelly Bean Mine

Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2014 10:01 am
by vwalla
I like it!! :lol:
Val W

Re: The Jelly Bean Mine

Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2014 10:43 am
by Heather
Save the black ones for me :D

Mmmm and the red ones, and the white ones - you can have the green ones! :)

Re: The Jelly Bean Mine

Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2014 12:56 pm
by Neville Briggs
And to think I bought shares in the M&M mining. :o

Re: The Jelly Bean Mine

Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2014 3:34 pm
by Stephen Whiteside
I started this thinking it would be a poem for kids, but quickly realised it was actually a little reflection on the highs and lows of parenting.

Re: The Jelly Bean Mine

Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2014 5:43 pm
by alongtimegone
As I started to read it I thought immediately of kids. Nicely done Stephen.
And I think the kids would enjoy it.
Wazza

Re: The Jelly Bean Mine

Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2014 7:23 pm
by Stephen Whiteside
OK. Thanks for that, Wazza.

Re: The Jelly Bean Mine

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2014 9:07 am
by Ron
I think you nailed it both ways Stephen, I enjoyed it and I have not long read it to my Six year old grandaughter who immediately gave it the thumbs up! (I think the jellybeans got her in straight away!)
Ron

Re: The Jelly Bean Mine

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2014 10:18 am
by Stephen Whiteside
That's great news, Ron. Thanks!