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The Lion's View
Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2014 10:18 pm
by Heather
Re: The Lion's View
Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2014 10:44 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Love it Heather - excuse my ignorance but where is this place of which you write? A gold town from long ago perhaps? You have some great images - I loved the goats ignoring fences, as they do. Nicely crafted
Cheers
Maureen
Re: The Lion's View
Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 7:04 am
by Bob Pacey
Yes Yes Yes
Great to see you writing again H
Poetry painting a picture wonderful images
Never seen Hoiking used before but it fits
Bob
Re: The Lion's View
Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:05 am
by warooa
Yes I liked hoiking skirts.
Evocatively written Heather.
Marty
Re: The Lion's View
Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:16 am
by Bob Pacey
Are you sure it was the hoiking you liked Marty or what was underneath.,
Bob
Re: The Lion's View
Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:20 am
by Ron
Enjoyed that Heather
Well done.
Ron.
Re: The Lion's View
Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:59 am
by warooa
Bob Pacey wrote:Are you sure it was the hoiking you liked Marty or what was underneath.,
Bob
Nuthin' like a good skirt hoik in a town of sin

Re: The Lion's View
Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:03 pm
by Heather
You'd only see ankles you wackers!
Re: The Lion's View
Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:09 pm
by Bob Pacey
Re: The Lion's View
Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:12 pm
by Neville Briggs
Some blokes are very excited by the sight of a sturdy ankle
A top poem Heather, Maureen has a point, maybe the name should be included.... just in the title ?