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The Lion's View

Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2014 10:18 pm
by Heather

Re: The Lion's View

Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2014 10:44 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Love it Heather - excuse my ignorance but where is this place of which you write? A gold town from long ago perhaps? You have some great images - I loved the goats ignoring fences, as they do. Nicely crafted

Cheers

Maureen

Re: The Lion's View

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 7:04 am
by Bob Pacey
Yes Yes Yes

Great to see you writing again H

Poetry painting a picture wonderful images

Never seen Hoiking used before but it fits


Bob

Re: The Lion's View

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:05 am
by warooa
Yes I liked hoiking skirts.

Evocatively written Heather.

Marty

Re: The Lion's View

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:16 am
by Bob Pacey
Are you sure it was the hoiking you liked Marty or what was underneath.,

Bob

Re: The Lion's View

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:20 am
by Ron
Enjoyed that Heather
Well done.
Ron.

Re: The Lion's View

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:59 am
by warooa
Bob Pacey wrote:Are you sure it was the hoiking you liked Marty or what was underneath.,

Bob
Nuthin' like a good skirt hoik in a town of sin ;)

Re: The Lion's View

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:03 pm
by Heather
You'd only see ankles you wackers!

Re: The Lion's View

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:09 pm
by Bob Pacey
Don't call Marty a Wacker whatever that means :o :o :o :o


Bob

Re: The Lion's View

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:12 pm
by Neville Briggs
Some blokes are very excited by the sight of a sturdy ankle :o :lol:

A top poem Heather, Maureen has a point, maybe the name should be included.... just in the title ?