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LOST LOVE

Posted: Fri May 23, 2014 1:44 pm
by Terry
After the revolution – a mushy one.


LOST LOVE
Way down in the gorges the shadows are falling,
while high in the heavens I hear her voice calling.
I sense that she’s near me though never in sight
and lives in my dreams as I sleep here each night.

I sit by the campfire the first stars now peeping,
as all through the outback the darkness is creeping.
I daydream of Jenny when I was her beau
and we were young lovers in days long ago.

The face of an angel and sweet were her kisses,
A gem among gems with those other young Misses.
And memory lingers of days long before,
When fate took a hand and my young loves no more.



© T.E. Piggott



Re: LOST LOVE

Posted: Fri May 23, 2014 2:44 pm
by Stephen Whiteside
I think this is meant as a metaphor for the LNP government, right, Terry?

Re: LOST LOVE

Posted: Fri May 23, 2014 2:57 pm
by Heather
Sounding a little bit Henry Kendall there Terry.... :)

Re: LOST LOVE

Posted: Fri May 23, 2014 4:12 pm
by Terry
G/day Stephen,

Is there no escape?

Terry

Re: LOST LOVE

Posted: Fri May 23, 2014 4:13 pm
by Terry
Hi Heather,
I hadn't thought about it but you're right, especially that first line.

Cheers Terry

Re: LOST LOVE

Posted: Fri May 23, 2014 5:36 pm
by Neville Briggs
Who says us old geezers aren't romantic Terry. ;) :) If you wanted to be really romantic you could have a go at making that into a sonnet. :)

Re: LOST LOVE

Posted: Fri May 23, 2014 8:29 pm
by Terry
Just spreading the love Neville.

Just wrote my first Haiku, never tried a sonnet - wouldn't know where to start.

Terry

Re: LOST LOVE

Posted: Fri May 23, 2014 8:32 pm
by Heather
Neville will explain.... :) ;)

Re: LOST LOVE

Posted: Fri May 23, 2014 9:12 pm
by Terry
Just remembered I did write on once a long time ago - home work or something